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Greg · 06-20-2007, 04:27 AM

I checked over the story again; couldn't resist tidying up some punctuation problems and a couple of said-bookisms.

06-20-2007, 04:27 AM	#11
Greg Da Guy Wut Owns Dis Joint Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 3,566	I checked over the story again; couldn't resist tidying up some punctuation problems and a couple of said-bookisms.