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Old 10-12-2008, 12:24 AM   #2010
Miros1
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he screamed and

(Greg, your period needs to be a comma. It's a dependent clause; this is the main part of the sentence.)
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A game that horrible Odessa-person introduced me to:
http://www.puzzlepirates.com/?affili...163251&lang=en
I'm spreading the addiction by corrupting all my friends (and attempting to make in-game money when they try the game).
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