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innocentmonster 04-09-2007 03:42 PM

Where's your family?
 
Cindy Wheres your parents?

Ok I know I can't believe I lost my family.My name is Cindy Heartlin and my family died in a tragic fire which I have no proof of but they died crying and left me money and my own home.I lived in Sim R.L. which meant Sim Real Love and my parents raised me there because it was the perfect place where there were no murders except when it was my sixteenth birthday.I looked out the window before I blew out my candels and when I looked back there was a fire surrounding my parents and my twin siblings Tanna and Hannah and my brother Tim who they all were almost killed but sadly for my parents they were.Luckly I was a teen and I skipped school sometimes to make sure I was there for the sick ones but I only missed school three times and my teachers and principle understood since they heard about my parents tragic death.Everyone in my town was nice and caring that some people offered to help raise us and we replied no.Then one day a lady we all called her the town old and happy.She told us she will help raise us and we let her seeing as she was to die in a month we would give her some joy.A month later we came into her room to tell her happy birthday seeing as she was turning 100 but when we came in I saw her face white and her eyes closed and he hands on her chest folded and then Grim came and took her away from us.When I saw her pale faced I pushed my siblings out the door and I went up to her side and cryed and when I came out the room Tanna,Hannah and Tim asked if she was ok and I said to them that she was now in a better place.The next day a stranger came to our home and asked me-
"Cindy where's your parents?"
I told her they were dead and buried somewhere nice with a golden tombstone and are now somewhere nice and pretty.

End of Chapter 1
(I know that there are no pictures but i'm trying to get some good ones from my game so hold tight and i'll post the next chapter in a few days with pic's but feel free to tell me your two cents)

Miros1 04-10-2007 02:53 AM

Kind of sad, but no where to go but up, right?

innocentmonster 04-10-2007 02:58 PM

yes and i'm going to continue soon maybe in a few hours but it Shall be continued

innocentmonster 06-03-2007 11:16 PM

sorry it hasn't been continued in a while but I will maybe get it done by the 9th but it depends because i'm having my computer still fixed so I need to have it repaired and reinstall my sims and get my new extension packs this week (university and H&M Fasion and Celebrations Stuff) but I will continue...well i'll try

Enchantsims 06-12-2007 06:52 AM

Will she find her parents?

innocentmonster 06-12-2007 05:14 PM

well she might but you'll find out but it will be good

innocentmonster 06-27-2007 04:50 PM

this story may not be continued please look on the weekend to see if there is an update.(I have to re-install my sim games)

Miros1 06-27-2007 09:10 PM

Back up your hood! Better safe than sorry!

innocentmonster 06-28-2007 08:28 PM

ya I know i'll try to do that if I remember to do it.I'll do that and I really want you all to read part 2.In Part 1 i'll edit it so that it has pictures.Part two will have the cast and then a short chapter

innocentmonster 07-01-2007 09:35 PM

um...what web can I use so that I can upload my images and put them on here for the story?

Greg 07-02-2007 01:48 AM

Photobucket seems to work really well. :D

innocentmonster 07-02-2007 02:23 AM


It was a happy family photo but I still wonder what ever happened to these smile's on our faces.

their lives burned

I still cry at night but this is the beginning cry

We moved into here with the Brooke family.They were kind and Mrs.Brooke loved me,my siblings and her children.

Dustin (her son) he came onto me,I kinda enjoyed it but then I remembered something

"what about your girlfriend,you know Angela?"

"I don't know..I have mixed feeling,many for both of you."

Miros1 07-02-2007 09:07 AM

Progressing nicely!

Greg 07-03-2007 04:33 AM

Oh yes! The pictures really make it happen! Darn, it doesn't look like Cindy will find her parents again.

innocentmonster 07-04-2007 01:58 AM


We went shopping just us girls and Tim.We got everyone clothes even for Beau but me and Dustin would come back soon to there.

When we got home I missed Beau's touch so I walked to his room and hugged him,I didn't let go until Dustin wanted Beau.

We began to talk about stuff and then we some how got back to the Angela or me subject.

"STOP!!!Why do you always have to do this.Do you really want me to say something bad like 'I choose Angela'."
"Oh so you choose her?"
"No...I...I love you..."
With just that he walked away.I couldn't believe he said he loved me,and I acted like a jerk.And then I ran up to him and....

"Wow...I...this is so much...I love you and I mean it...a lot!"
"This kiss to me meant a lot too."
I then layed down in bed and relaxed when I saw something that amazed me.

He found me hot!

Tanna was daydreaming of Hannah.

Hannah was asleep.And soon finally I fell asleep but I saw something and realized it was.....

It was mom!I thought I was going crazy but I wasn't.

But soon she began to fade.I miss her still.

Greg 07-04-2007 04:00 AM

Ah, the emotional rollercoaster of youth!

innocentmonster 07-04-2007 10:46 PM


We decided to have a family photo.We would have another one when the baby is born.

The girl thinking of mom is Tanna the one next to her is Hannah.

The woman there is Brandi and the boy she is holding is Beau.

Then I saw something that discusted me...Angela and Dustin kissing.

The next day I came to the Pleasant's house from school because Lily invited me.

This girl over here next to the lady with the baby is Lily aka Lilith Pleasant.

This is Angela...wow she does look bad...not to be rude.

This is Dan Pleasant.

This woman who is largely pregnant is Martha also known as Mary-Sue Pleasant.

She gave birth to moments later to twin boys,Marshall and Jeff Pleasant.Then Dustin broke-up with Angela and I became best friends with all the Pleasant's except for Angela.I asked Dan what he thinks of Angela and he said that he hates her and so does Martha.

I met the maid,she was pretty but Martha looked like an angel.

I fell asleep there but when I awoke I saw Martha and Dan breaking up.I was sad.

And so was Lily.I saw Angela a minute later and she was smiling as Lily cried.

innocentmonster 07-04-2007 10:48 PM

Ok here this goes...With one more chapter I will be have more chapter's than anyone who has a story that is to be continued

innocentmonster 07-06-2007 09:34 PM


In the other room Tanna was clinging to her teddy.She saw mom's ghost and woke up to an empty room.

I changed my outfit,I like green now!

And so did Dustin!

We talked alittle later on,we discussed Love and our relationship,then he asked if we could go steady so he proposed to me!I was so excited.He said we'd marry when we were eighteen.I can't wait!

Finally the time came.We rushed her to the hospital.The doctor's said the boy was ok.She stayed for two hours more to make sure the baby was ok.

Here he is!The greatest bundle of joy in her arms at the moment.His name you ask?His name is Vladim Broke but you can just call him V.B.

innocentmonster 07-16-2007 12:41 AM

Should I continue?


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